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Ketchup Kid
gaztred
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It's difficult to tell as its a poor quality picture. From what little I can see it looks good. Can you get a clearer picture?
gaztred- Posts : 100
Join date : 2016-05-04
Age : 56
Location : Bucks
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Found this one in my phone but still not the best. I'll take a decent pic later
Found this one in my phone but still not the best. I'll take a decent pic later
tyler300888- Posts : 215
Join date : 2016-05-12
Location : The wet welsh valleys
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blurry photos... the first trick in the book... ha ha
her lips are sewn shut to keep her quiet? great idea i need to do that
even if its not perfect, its cool dude
her lips are sewn shut to keep her quiet? great idea i need to do that
even if its not perfect, its cool dude
Ketchup Kid- Posts : 301
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You've nailed the overall form and the hair seems to flow, though for a 3rl the lines look heavy, suggesting the needles penetrating too much. This injects too much ink and if it hits below the dermis it effectively flows / spreads.
The grey wash is a bit tentative and (I believe) if you went back in with a strong black, particularly in the hair you could really lift the whole piece. This is about achieving a wider tonal or value range - deep black to flesh / white. Identify the darkest areas and hit with black, creating more contrast.
The grey wash is a bit tentative and (I believe) if you went back in with a strong black, particularly in the hair you could really lift the whole piece. This is about achieving a wider tonal or value range - deep black to flesh / white. Identify the darkest areas and hit with black, creating more contrast.
Whippet- Posts : 149
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Location : UK
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Just like whippet said it needs more contrast. Don't be afraid to put that black in there.
easy31st- Posts : 93
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Whippet wrote:You've nailed the overall form and the hair seems to flow, though for a 3rl the lines look heavy, suggesting the needles penetrating too much. This injects too much ink and if it hits below the dermis it effectively flows / spreads.
i think he sculpted the lines
did you not ty?
Ketchup Kid- Posts : 301
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Tell you what, that's one beautiful image!
GM74- Posts : 25
Join date : 2016-06-06
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Thanks guys, i think I did go in a bit too deep in places as it was around the time I started to work from the tip of the needle instead of riding the tube but some of the lines I built up.
With regards to going darker, its more of a confidence thing that im slowly working on.
I would love to go back and completely rework it but my wife is happy with it.
The next b and g piece I do, gonna take your advice and go darker... What's the worst that can happen
With regards to going darker, its more of a confidence thing that im slowly working on.
I would love to go back and completely rework it but my wife is happy with it.
The next b and g piece I do, gonna take your advice and go darker... What's the worst that can happen
tyler300888- Posts : 215
Join date : 2016-05-12
Location : The wet welsh valleys
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i would ditch the 3rl liner for now mate & go with a 7rl...did you copy this from an image or is it something you drew mate
head- Posts : 202
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tyler300888 wrote:The next b and g piece I do, gonna take your advice and go darker... What's the worst that can happen
Blackout
Whippet- Posts : 149
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Location : UK
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head wrote:i would ditch the 3rl liner for now mate & go with a 7rl...did you copy this from an image or is it something you drew mate
I really struggle using a 3rl, not so bad on 5rl but a lot better using a 7rl so I will try and stick to that. Every little shake shows on a 3rl lol.
The design was something my wife pulled off google
tyler300888- Posts : 215
Join date : 2016-05-12
Location : The wet welsh valleys
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yes mate i would stick to designs where you can only use a 7rl for now...
the tattoo is not unsaveable which is a good thing
the tattoo is not unsaveable which is a good thing
head- Posts : 202
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